This is so absolutely heartwarming! I had a huge smile on my face the whole time I was reading it. I could feel Jongin's love for his family, how much he adores his two boys. Your writing was lovely, it feels so warm, so natural. I love that there isn't any huge plot or story to it, it's just one day in their life and tbh, that is so relatable. It's just a simple retelling of a normal day in their life, one that so many people everywhere lives through each day. And maybe, somewhere out there, someone is as lucky as Jongin is to have the love of his life with him, raising an adorable kid that they both love unconditionally. Goals!
Speaking of their adorable kid, Yoo is so cute! He's the absolute star of this fic. I could just picture him with his huge eyes and his cute button nose, chubby cheeks... waddling around with his Pororo plushie and his yellow blanket. The image of him with his yellow blankie was so cute I wish he was a real kid because I want to see him and coo at him. He was just so precious, from not sleeping early, to watching penguins, to waking Jongin up and interchanging Dad with Daddy haha! Also when he was like "Blankie, das you!" MY HEART WAS SO FULL AND BURSTING WITH LOVE.
But my favorite part was when Jongin was sitting down on the toilet and Kyungsoo came in and Jongin hugged his waist and buried his face on Kyungsoo's tummy, while Kyungsoo stroked his hair... just, that was such a great scene. Because you could really feel Jongin's exhaustion from his day, which we've all felt more than once in our life, and he's fortunate enough to have a Kyungsoo there with him to help him through the tiredness. I could really feel the love in this family. You did such a great job.
I wish I could just read about their everyday life forever and that it never ends. Thank you so much for writing such an enjoyable fic!
ps; shoutout to that dino image of them chasing each other around the house and kyungsoo rolling his eyes at them but then joining in too so much sweet domestic fluff
pps: i need to mention this because this is such a beautiful detail... "their wedding rings clinking against each other." my heart is so weak. /wipes tear
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Speaking of their adorable kid, Yoo is so cute! He's the absolute star of this fic. I could just picture him with his huge eyes and his cute button nose, chubby cheeks... waddling around with his Pororo plushie and his yellow blanket. The image of him with his yellow blankie was so cute I wish he was a real kid because I want to see him and coo at him. He was just so precious, from not sleeping early, to watching penguins, to waking Jongin up and interchanging Dad with Daddy haha! Also when he was like "Blankie, das you!" MY HEART WAS SO FULL AND BURSTING WITH LOVE.
But my favorite part was when Jongin was sitting down on the toilet and Kyungsoo came in and Jongin hugged his waist and buried his face on Kyungsoo's tummy, while Kyungsoo stroked his hair... just, that was such a great scene. Because you could really feel Jongin's exhaustion from his day, which we've all felt more than once in our life, and he's fortunate enough to have a Kyungsoo there with him to help him through the tiredness. I could really feel the love in this family. You did such a great job.
I wish I could just read about their everyday life forever and that it never ends. Thank you so much for writing such an enjoyable fic!
ps; shoutout to that dino image of them chasing each other around the house and kyungsoo rolling his eyes at them but then joining in too so much sweet domestic fluff
pps: i need to mention this because this is such a beautiful detail... "their wedding rings clinking against each other." my heart is so weak. /wipes tear