oh i loved this so much i can't even explain it. i adore moving-in fics and i love how you set this one up. kyungsoo's casual-not-so-casual offer, baekhyun's freak out, it was just really really well done. and i loved how you wrote their relationship, how they've been together for such a long time and how that's what brings baekhyun down from his panic, realizing that of course kyungsoo meant what he said. but even then, his rambling little speech when they talk about it later is precious and i love how kyungsoo is there to reassure him. there's just this wonderful balance here to their relationship and something about it made me cry while reading lmao because i am a sap. it was just really beautiful. T__T i also really enjoyed the little insight into kyungsoo's pov at the end, showing how they fit together, how they get the puppy!!, how it's a little weird but how kyungsoo clearly loves it all the same. ahhhhh im in love with this. truly.
also this little exchange was a delight: "I still practise my I love you's when you're not around," Kyungsoo admits. "Now you can practise every day, with the real thing!" He puckers his lips, eyelashes fluttering. "Say it." "I love you," Kyungsoo grumbles. "Good boy."
PRECIOUS. as was the rest of the fic. thank you so much for writing, i enjoyed this immensely. ❤_❤
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Date: 2016-09-15 03:11 pm (UTC)also this little exchange was a delight:
"I still practise my I love you's when you're not around," Kyungsoo admits.
"Now you can practise every day, with the real thing!" He puckers his lips, eyelashes fluttering. "Say it."
"I love you," Kyungsoo grumbles.
"Good boy."
PRECIOUS. as was the rest of the fic. thank you so much for writing, i enjoyed this immensely. ❤_❤