I seriously don't know what else to say other than THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL;-; I seriously thought that I'd be crying because of the angst but it was so equally distributed with the cute domesticity and the patching up of their relationship that I was able to go through the story without feeling like my heart was going to break. Thought I still felt a bit teary-eyed from the part where Yifan talked about that time he almost cheated >_< Everything was so realistic; about how relationships sometimes have fall outs over the smallest of things that grow bigger and bigger, the results that come about because of them – both good and bad – and what people do to try to salvage what they have. The emotions are so well conveyed too. And I love that. I love it so much I need to pause to cry. Brb.
And omg *squeals* Shixun as their son, of course*^^*
Maine, I never once doubted your writing and I'm so glad that you wrote this. This was so so so beautiful and I'm sure a lot of people will be able to relate to this, not only because this is what happens in relationships that have been together for a long time but because you also wrote in a very relatable manner. I will never stop hoping that you will come back to writing fanxing, I don't care if it takes a while, this fandom will always need you^^ I will be patient :p Again, I love this, I love you! I can't wait to read more of your writing again :>
PS I knew you took this prompt the moment you told me you're writing for a fest again XD And I'm so glad you didn't break my heart too much with this. :>
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Date: 2016-09-25 11:51 am (UTC)And omg *squeals* Shixun as their son, of course*^^*
Maine, I never once doubted your writing and I'm so glad that you wrote this. This was so so so beautiful and I'm sure a lot of people will be able to relate to this, not only because this is what happens in relationships that have been together for a long time but because you also wrote in a very relatable manner. I will never stop hoping that you will come back to writing fanxing, I don't care if it takes a while, this fandom will always need you^^ I will be patient :p Again, I love this, I love you! I can't wait to read more of your writing again :>
PS I knew you took this prompt the moment you told me you're writing for a fest again XD And I'm so glad you didn't break my heart too much with this. :>
PPS Why does this not have more comments????